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Score: 8
Street Race Night

"Good try."

submission: Street Race Night
date: September 4, 2009

It's a nice little game, but there is only one track and one car,but as you said its your first attempt. Now maybe in your next one you could add more cars and tracks, and maybe able to play against cpu players aswell.

September 4, 2009

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yes, thanks

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Score: 6
Endless War 4

"Could have been better."

submission: Endless War 4
date: September 2, 2009

Quite frankly i am disappointed at it. Not only is it exactly the same as the other 3, its even worse. The enemy AI don't even notice you're there until you are almost directly in front of them and they have no objection to kill their teammates. I mean you could have at least added a mechanic to let them know that there ally is in front of you so they won't shoot.You added like3 new weapons,no new sidearms or grenades, the ally AI are still dumber than a rock, and you have to guide them to where you want to go, or else they'll just run into a wall.

You had less maps, and they weren't even that fun. You had three campaigns with 4 missions each, each mission had 3 maps, yes thats 36 maps, but 36 not that good maps. Basically to me it seems like you just redid Endless War 3 except it was worse, had 3 new main weapons, and three campaigns that weren't even that good. I think you should redo the entire thing, Make the AI more smart like have the enemies and allies know to not shoot when there is their own teammate in front of them, have more melee weapons, have more sidearms and more grenades, you could also make the maps more diverse so they aren't the same things over and over again.

Instead of being a generic person each mission, you should be able to make a custom character to play the missions with, make the guns moddable or upgradeable.

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Score: 9
Charlie the Unicorn 3

"A brilliant flash!"

date: April 17, 2009

This flash is very good, most of the animations were smooth, it has top quality graphics, and lots of humor in it. But the walking animation for Charlie seems fixed, it's ok but there is room for improvement, i mean it looks like the legs just switch placed to make a cheap walking effect. But over all this is a great flash, i love the surface of the river's animation and the under water effects, but i also think that it's a tad too short.I love the little song at the end.

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Score: 8
xX_Jelly Bean War_Xx

"nice work."

date: February 24, 2009

the animation was a little slow, but the flash was good. especially since it's your first. I have no doubt that you will get better. Most of the greatest artists on NG start off with something simple like this and develop better flashes and better animation skill. I think that this series will be a good one if you keep it up. you could add a little more detail in your next movie. Keep up your fantastic work! i'll be sure to watch your future stuff.

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Score: 7
Rig Rig Revolution

"its quite funny but."

submission: Rig Rig Revolution
date: February 22, 2009

You guys really need to put some of that ole' effort into the works. Imagine what 3 days of animating could have done for this, it would really make the flash better.

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Score: 10
Its a Tank!

"HAHAHA! nice one guys!"

submission: Its a Tank!
date: February 16, 2009

This was absolutely beautiful! And a nice way to start up the NG Tank Awards! nice jobs guys!

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Score: 7
Arachnid Wars

"Nice new game you have"

submission: Arachnid Wars
date: February 11, 2009

Just a minor thing though, it really isn't that fun if you can't actually control your units freely, it's a nice addicting game but it would be better if the player could send one unit one way and another unit another way instead of then going on their own predetermined paths.You also said something about a Fallout inspired rpg? and if so are you going to make it like this where you just create units hit the start button and watch then fight, or can we be able to actually tell the units where to go?

February 11, 2009

Author's Response:

Imagine this: both bases are controlled by AI and you play not as spiders or scorpions but as a guy with a gun :P With full control of actions of course. Thats what I mean when speaking of an RPG.

This game is an AI vs AI combat test.

I might make a second version of Arachnid Wars, where you actually control every unit, but I'm not sure if its worth wasting time on...

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Score: 10
He's A Slidin'

"damn he's fast!"

submission: He's A Slidin'
date: January 26, 2009

He's like a stickman with the speed of a ninja.Nice job and nice music.

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Score: 10
The Way of My Madness

"blows my mind"

date: January 7, 2009

This has to be the best hand drawn madness film i have ever seen.I mean it beats MindChanber's madness flash.Also i am looking forward to this on madness day.

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Score: 4
7C's Goes Clubbin'

"needs alot of work"

submission: 7C's Goes Clubbin'
date: January 1, 2009

This flash really does need alot of work, like a full flash movie a plot, and something other than stupid spam.The ironic thing is that poozy produced this, so he is actually doing the opposite of what he is supposed to do. I am ashamed of him.

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